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Never and Sometime

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We are partners against all crime
My name is Never and his name is Sometime
Super Heros of the Asian World
The only way we could get any girls

Protectors in the night of the streets
We like helping the beautiful girls we met
I Never have had any sex at all
I give the girls my phone but they never call

And Sometimes says he’s had sex twice
And for him it was quite nice
Our super thong suits are unique
It gives the Lady’s a look at our sexy physique

Of our muscular strength and form
To show you with what we were born
We fear no one that we take on
Just one look at us and they are gone

With our bullet fast powers
We can climb building towers
We have a blinding shield on our head
The makes the criminal eyes turn red

With our circles of power in our hand
We throw then to catch our villain man
No one escapes from Never and Sometime
For we are the Super Heros that fight crime

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 23, 2007

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    i am going to whoop griswold dear this was a great humerous read how you created never and sometime sis we all have our own unique drive and you are very well with this type of art world i will be glad to see you and "B" in another trial write that was hilarious i loved this


    • esroddo silver member
      July 23, 2007
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      The picture is a funny one sis. The one in Blue remained me of MY husband hes just as thin. Thank for the great review. I try to write funny and different. (LISA)


  • yassmin
    July 23, 2007
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    wowww nice,funny,great link u made,great imagery really nicee write,well done

    • esroddo silver member
      July 23, 2007
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      Thank you sweet rose. Glad you liked it, The picture is a funny one. (LISA)


  • Brazos silver member
    July 23, 2007

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    I love what you did with the pic

    but I find it a little offensive. I know that Griswold posted the pic, but I can't enter this contest. Young boys in thongs? I don't think that is appropiate...

    You know I love you Lisa, but watch out. I don't think child porn is appropriate, not even from someone as wild as me.

    I have never done it, and neither should you.

    I love you,
    Brazos


    • esroddo silver member
      July 23, 2007
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      Your to funny sweetness

      I just take on the prompt of the picture. It was of two funny guys. so I had to make them into super heros. They are not children didn't you see there big rod. hahaha (LISA)


  • Griswold silver member
    July 23, 2007

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    ROFLMAO, Ahhhhhhh, Yes this is what I'm talking about. Crimefighters extraordinare, I wonder what their super powers are? Best of luck and thanks for entering...Scott


    • esroddo silver member
      July 28, 2007
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      Thank you dear for the HM and for a great funny pic can't wait for the next one love. (LISA)

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