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Darkness Saves The Light

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You picked out the best of me
turning me over
for another bite of deception.

I let you in;
furnishing each day
with a new kind of laugh.

We rode on wings
pointing out the sky
as the clouds disappeared.

But you soon grew tired,
afraid and misused ~
fingers pinching my heart;

you sent me away...

The coffee sits untouched
and I dive into the black
hiding beneath memories.

I like it here
not seen by mourners
who try to remain impartial;

Close the door,
I'm sleeping...

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  • Lady Disdain
    August 3, 2007
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    Nice job. Good Luck in the contest!