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Deception

Disillusionment is my predecessor,
and deception is
my crime.
I have not been truthful
about my past, but neither
am I wrong to keep
my secrets.

Your crime was no worse than mine
no fate worse than death.
Truth is over rated,
trust is just a figment
of an imagination
to full of
illusion
to see the truth for what it is.
You lie, I decieve
I believe, you buy.

we're two sides
of one coin.
I see no difference.

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  • SpydurPoet
    July 22, 2007

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    I loved this. The last stanza is my favorite, especially the last three lines. The only thing is, the first line of the third part, 'predicessor' should be 'predecessor'. Still a great read!
    Write on!
    ~*~SP~*~