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On Top of Old Smokey (the second)

On top of old Smokey,
all covered with cheese;
I lost my true lover,
'cause I didn't say please.

We were out having dinner,
having some fun.
She called me a sinner,
for saying a pun.

I told her to drive me,
drive me home.
Home to my dog,
(have to give him a bone).

Then she threw all,
her spaghetti at me,
got into my car and,
drove to the city.

So if you need someone,
to, you know, drive.
Say it politely;
if you value being alive.

Author notes

1. I like rhyming poems best.
2. Picture or style prompts are good.
3. Mi nombre es RisingTideofChrist.
4. I want to be in the Rounds Contest b/c I'm unique, imaginitive, and bored.

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  • warrior-eagle
    January 28, 2008

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    This made me laugh,
    unless it wasn't intended to do so
    but i liked it.
    Lol.
    Good.

    ...Simply Me♥


  • RisingTideofChrist
    August 10, 2007
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    Contest option number 1.