cardboard boxes
will never
keep us dry
under pouring
rain;;
you said
love will keep us
together
& I actually believed you.
my eyes are sore
from watching
those
kids munch on
T.G.I.F burgers
dipped in
honey mustard sauce.
[the only thing we did was watch]
yup.
we watched//
watched our future fall like those twin towers,
(that dust was sure as hell hazardous.)
honey;
dismal skies and dumpster remnants
are no longer
romantic.
[insert bullshit here]
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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honey;
dismal skies and dumpster remnants
are no longer
romantic.
Well this is life and its image which is unsure to its own world is the base of the defination of life ..you have described it so beautifully well done...
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whoaaaa. this was fantastic!!!
"honey; dismal skies and dumpster remnants are no longer romantic. [insert bullshit here]"
that's gotta be my favorite! i loved the play-on-words and the flow of this... very well done.
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so creatively funny..in a sad kinda way.
lol..if that makes sense.
I liked your take on this prompt.
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wow~ very, abstract,! <3 great write i loved it
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