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I'm Falling For You.

I'm falling for you
but I wonder
if you feel the same way
about me?

Everytime I think about you
My heart starts racing
Everytime I see your face
I get butterflies

Is this love?
I don't know
I've never been in love
so how do I know that this is real?

I can't stop thinking about you
I can't stop missing you
I've never felt this way before
I think I love you

When we are together
I feel like nothing can go wrong
when I am in your arms
I feel safe and protected

But most of all
when we are together
I feel loved and wanted
another thing I've never felt before

Everytime I think about you
My heart starts racing
Everytime I see your face
I get butterflies

Is this real?
Or a dream?
Is this love?
Or just lust?

Author notes

Its how I feel right now. I can't stop thinking about him....

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  • Perfectly Imperfect
    September 1, 2007
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    I really like this. It's sweet and unsure and goes really well with being in love/having a crush. I know what this feels like, and its the best feeling in the world when they feel the same I notice it's written a little while ago, so I hope things went well
    You did a really good job expressing yourself with this. Well done


    • XStuckInANightmareX
      September 2, 2007
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      Thanks. But if you read the last poem I wrote after this one you'll see where it went. lol


  • King Nothing
    July 26, 2007
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    It's great you found someone....I'm still mister lonely over here.....

    Well. I LOVE you!


  • PaigeyPie
    July 26, 2007
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    Freddy it goes with the first comment k love ya

  • PaigeyPie
    July 26, 2007

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    Supercalifagalistic

    Wow u have have a boy I didn't know. Who I won't say what we say is totally different we don't have to tell mom and dad anything we don;t want to so please tell me I pinky swear I won't tell and bb said mexy but I don;t know who mexy is so please don't say it's him say the real name. but really ur a great writer and u should use ur talent on like a kids poem sometime. Well love ya sis.

    Love,
    ♥~Freddy~♥


  • -Kayleigh-
    July 25, 2007
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    Great.

    This is great man. I understand how you feel completely. I felt the same way when I first met Michael. I didn't know if it was love or lust & then we were together for 3 years & I now know it is love. lol. I am happy that you found someone you really like but if Mexy hurts you he's gonna get it man. lol. Love you. ♥

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