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[You Guessed It] Right Now.

Choke, just suffocate
Live to let go, and drop dead-weight
Right now.

Nothing you said yesterday will matter tomorrow
But what you say today has some kind of meaning
Right now anyway.

This is sorrow,
As God intended.
I told you I'd fix it.


I said-
Choke, just suffocate,
Live to let go, and drop dead-weight
Right now. 
I said,
Right now.

This is it
I told you ( I can't fix it ).


Forgetting, remembering,
And otherwise trashing our minds,
With honest mistakes-
[Accidents, that became knife-slashes,
And the closest thing to fate]. 

I am sorrow,
As God forgot it.
Nothing's getting fixed, right now.

Choke, just suffocate
Live to let go, and drop dead-weight
Right now.


This can't wait.

This won't wait.

This is it.







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  • Starcrossed Dreamer
    August 8, 2007
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    I feel like...

    Okay... I'm on a boat that sinking...and I'm trapped in one of the cabins... and I'm trying to convince myself to drown... It paints a creepy and satisfying illusion of not being able to breathe... just swallow that water down. Give yourself to the depths..etc..

    Wonderful, loves


    • Allure of a Rose
      August 8, 2007
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      Very nice.
      I'm pleased with your... interpretation, I guess the word is. Not entirely sure.