Stalkers
Out on the loose
Ring things don't mean a thing
Friday comes around; rent is due
Business is business for the man in blue
My certainty worry what brings
Blings slip into the dollar
Privacy ruse
Stalkers
Hurting
This cold heart same
Numbing these feelings game
Friday comes around; rent is due
Business is business for the man in blue
My certainty worry what brings
Lipstick on your collar
Doesn’t this feel mused?
Hurting
Author notes
Double Rictameter-form-musical:
9-line syllables-2/4/6/8/10/8/6/4/2
First & Last line the same.
In a list
A contest entry
- Musical Rictameters!!! by second-born.
500 points, ended August 2, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is such a nice rictameter...you've done a good job!!!
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thank u
for the great critique and comments on my poem.
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