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A Strange Anticipation


How is it I feel the slight wind even now,
          almost breathing on my thoughts, and
the gentle green resistance of grass
          beneath my tennis shoes?

How is it I sense a partial shade
          across the hairs of my neck,
cast by the whispering arms of a fir
          planted long before my time?

How is it I see through surrounding trees
          small white clouds, folding in silent
contrast across clear blue depths, and there
          your weather beaten stone?

Though I have yet to pay my respects, I feel
          an approaching familiarity.
I don't know what compels me to drive so far,
          just to stand by your grave.

Maybe I hope to find a touch of your presence,
          still lingering behind.
Or perhaps some small piece of inspiration,
          left twinkling in the grass.

 

 

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  • Lily of The Valleys
    September 18, 2007

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    Or perhaps some small piece of inspiration,
    left twinkling in the grass.

    Wow, doesn't it seem like the things we once could do so easily before are suddenly impossible when death comes into play. I percieve that you feel helpless in your strength and cannot muster what you need to write your poetry.. That is your strength.

  • Kay Laon Anders
    July 23, 2007

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    Great Imagination

    It is like you have already been there...and I am guessing since you said you arn't leaving until Wednesday that you are just imagining....


    my favorite part are the last two lines:

    "Or perhaps some small piece of inspiration,
    left twinkling in the grass"

    Reminds me of standing at Karen's or Grandfather's grave but in a different way...like it was for the last time or something...

    I will comment further later on...lol...gotta go

    Kay


  • stompsalot
    July 22, 2007

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    WOW

    This is an AWESOME moving piece! It kinda makes me want to smile and cry at the same time. Brilliant work.
    Love it!!
    Blessings and *stomps