Once, he was such a nice, soft,
but now many call him Big Tooth.
He wasn't scary, he was only a soft, white, Bunny Boo.
Now I am here to tell you about him.. or it...
a word or two.
It was many years ago...
(this is how all scary stories begin)
...at one dark night,
it was a stormy and thunders and...lightening...
(you already know this kind of scary scene..don't you?)
... no electric lights.
Shivers went down my spine...
I found a candle. I put it next to my bed
(try to imagine it in the dark...it was midnight and fifteen,
because it wasn't usual - yellow, white or red)
it was a small piece of candle and it was dark green.
Not enough scary?
Now, wait...you will see...
You are still not covered over your head?
You are still not crawling to find a shelter under your bed?
Something rustled,
there, in the dark,
between the waving shadows,
and something... was there, dancing in the air,
something like a ghost was siting on the chair,
and then I had to go,
ah...
you already know...
where.
Slowly I went out of bed, I put one leg to the floor,
and another one too.
I hope that you do not think that I was jumping
keeping another one in the air, like a spring?
No way...
I took the candle, of course, and I opened the door...
Now you will ask, what, the hell, she is talking about,
and where finally is this scary, white Bunny Boo?
That night, I was safe and sound, with no doubt
he went to some other place.
Watch carefully over you toes....maybe, soon, it will attack you!
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it supposed to be funny or scary... depends of you.
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A contest entry
- Can You??? by 2lullabyhaven.
550 points, ended July 17, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Your narrative skills are great hahaha how you intertwined yourself in the piece; thanks for your entry and good luck
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This is funny! I love the words in parenthesis. LOL Great job! Your prompt seems hard. I like how there is humor, and mystery, and ghostly fright. BOO! LOL Good luck in the contest!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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My sweet sister, this was quite the take on your chosen mystery option. A bit spooky and definately humorous all at the same time. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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lovely, good luck with the contest, it made me chuckle at the end.
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ROFL you had me crying from laughing too hard about midway lol good luck
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