Nothing, nothing
enter a thought,
called nothing
press it in our mind
Nothing, Nothing, Nothing
eventually, thats all
Nothing,
You're thinking
Nothing at all.
Tranquil peace.
What a place to be
Not a worry
Not a care
Not a sliver,
Of any other thought
A temporary coma,
Of the mind
Enjoy it,
As you don't think.
Author notes
You should try it sometime....its quite strange because if you do it right, you will think about nothing, and its quite strange indeed to think about nothing, even though if you ask someone what they are thinking about they always say nothing, this is not what it is, and you know it.
Please tell me what you think
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I have never been able to acheive void, acheive nothing, something always slips in and distracts me great poem though
I am jelous of your ability to not think of anything at all
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"You're thinking
Nothing at all."
Intesting flow.
Nice!
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I like this. And I will try it. For sure.
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oh wow... never really thought along this line. drain your mind of every thing. i like the thoughts behind this one. thanks for sharing... and i will think of "nothing" as the days go by
"Tranquil peace.
What a place to be
Not a worry
Not a care
Not a sliver,
Of any other thought"
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haha wow this is a great poem, makes me think i'd like to think about nothing! so.. ya i'll have to try it sometime, thanks for sharing,
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cliver peice i liked this good job, like the repition of nothing, normally that kind of repition doesnt fall easy on my ears but it worked in this, verry good job
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