Exquisite Insanity
I have never known
anything like this.
I’m suffering from
exquisite insanity.
Wanting to be where I am,
constantly yeaning,
eternally yearning,
ongoing yearning.
Yearning is always with me,
even when I am with you...
What madness is this?
Author notes
It is worse than mercury but just as beautiful!
A contest entry
- Happines is like mercury... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
425 points, ended August 4, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Yearning is always with me,
even when I am with you...
What madness is this?
Humm you made me to think..It is really very thought provoking but at the same time very beautiful verse here..thanks for such a heartfelt entry in contest..
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few lines, beautiful background and the last line has described everything about ur feelings. Nice Quickie
Keep it u



