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Exquisite Insanity

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Exquisite Insanity

I have never known
anything like this.
I’m suffering from
exquisite insanity.

Wanting to be where I am,
constantly yeaning,
eternally yearning,
ongoing yearning.

Yearning is always with me,
even when I am with you...
What madness is this?



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It is worse than mercury but just as beautiful!

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 3, 2007

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    Yearning is always with me,
    even when I am with you...
    What madness is this?

    Humm you made me to think..It is really very thought provoking but at the same time very beautiful verse here..thanks for such a heartfelt entry in contest..


  • MonGrandAmour
    July 23, 2007

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    few lines, beautiful background and the last line has described everything about ur feelings. Nice Quickie
    Keep it u