Clouds merge together
in a dim light
painting colors in the sky
Reaching into the air
longing to scrape clouds
a pair of hands
They claw desperately
but fail in their goal
perhaps they'll reach it
For now all they can do is try
Author notes
I was lying on the beach towards dusk and I couldnt explain why but I just raised my hands up to the sky....for some reason that image stayed with me and it stayed with me long enough for me to get home and write a poem.
A contest entry
- Help me help my best friend!!!! by Sara Bellem.
550 points, ended September 10, 2007, 13 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I don't quite understand how this fits with my contest, but I can kind of understand the positive message you are conveying and I did ask for positive writes :) Perhaps I misinterupted your poem, anywho, best wishes and thank you so much for entering... God Bless :f
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