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Ill never forget you

I cry when i remember all this years
days of joy and laughter and no tears
we thought forever we would be
stupid i was not to relise
that all the words we said were lies.


we made promises
we sword on our lives 
to each other, always to be true
you remember ?
you remember also the fun on the swings at the easter show?


i still remember every word you said
and every meal we ate.
and every joke you said that made me laugh.
and every stupid thing you made me do.
i thought we had its all,
back in the days.

now i don't know what went wrong
its only silence between us
and condemning thoughts.

do you ask your self what went wrong?
or do you just blame me for everything.
on my part i know its not your fault
and its not mine its ours
believe it or not.

all we have left is the thoughts
of the good times
so hard to let go, right?
i know how it feels
i got emotions to.


so many promises we broke
but only i have failed to let go of,
the one you made vow.
to never ever forget you.

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  • Mizz-xxx-unloved
    November 11, 2007
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    Lovin the poem a ready and i onlu just started!!


  • xxlisajazminexx
    September 20, 2007

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    yes I knew it.... loving your poems more and more as i read into them....
    I know how you feel ... alot of my poetry has the same feel to it as yours... you would like them I'm sure!
    much love! and great write!


  • Abner
    August 19, 2007
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    thanks for your comments guys.


  • Carnell Kemp
    August 5, 2007
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    i feel that one


  • Beautifully Poetic
    August 5, 2007

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    that is such an awesome write seriously!!! your style is very unique!!!! i look forward to read more of your work!!!

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