With a knife
He engraves a name
Marks the blade
With his regrets
A tinted poison
Digs it deep
A story carved into his arm
That would frighten a child in their sleep
A waste of life
A waste of breath
A waste of time
Hurtling closer to death
One regret
Two regrets
Three, fuck even four
Are you blind?
Can’t you see?
He just doesn’t give a shit anymore
One regret
Two regrets
Three regrets
Four
Takes a needle
Stabs it down
And ends his life forever more
Upon the blood stained bathroom floor
Please tell me what you think
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Tommy, this piece is penned with so much pain and imagery...reading this was like standing outside the bathroon window looking, not being able to help.
Well done.
Cathy
♥♥♥♥
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wow this was wounderful,
great wright sweetie, i loved the flow a whole lot, great poem really much love....xoxox -
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really painful.. and full of so much emotion.
i really
REALLY like it! nice write. -
=[ *wipes away tear*
this is sad tommmy. i dont want you to leave me =[ your my best friend.
this was really.... just sad.
talk to me if u need to =]
i lub u
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Ta XD
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