You have seen
me at my worst
and yet are still
by my side
you have my
full trust
and i wish
to have yours
i feel so happy
around you
i dont want to
destroy it
I have a knack for saying
the wrong things
you forgive me
im in heaven with you
i feel everything
fade away
death, hurt, pain
only happiness when your by my side
i know you dont
care
and im not good
enough
but i can dream
and then
everything is so
right
I'm in heaven with you
you command my attention
but you like someone
else
tears appear at the thought
would you truly miss me
if i was gone
or would it be a friend thing?
I'm in hell without you
please forgive me
im too rough to
be loved and to be girly
command my heart?
you have it
no if ands or buts
im so lost without you to guide me
guide me to your heart
let me risk
saying i love you
and getting one in return
I'm in heaven with you by my side ♥
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well dayyum.
[n2s: that means its hella good ;p]
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wow..this is reli good..its how it reminds me of how i feel sometimes abt someone in particular..
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I definately agree with that last comment. By the way, i do NOT believe this poem is just another stupid love poem... it's very different from any other i have ever read.
wow, wow, wow, wow, WOW!
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I've welled up
Seriously, I could cry right now but I'm trying not to as I'm going out soon and just did make-up etc.
It is really quite amazing for such sweet, simple language to have such a powerful effect on the reader. Maybe this is a special poetic trait you have - not everyone can convey such empathy with so little lines each stanza.
You have great potential, you know.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Keep them coming!
ELW
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awe very sweet and so well written for such a young girl
keep it up! I have one called lost together with one of those pics 
thanks for stopping by "whispered moments"
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haha I hear that alot!
But thanks!
your poemage was awesome :]
♥--T.R;;
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lvv ♥♥♥ It Shelb, i have a bunch of those pictures. There the best. But you'r poems even greater see ya...write more great poems!!!
-maddie
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I like it
Well written.
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Thanks :]
♥--T.R
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Luv it it is awesome and sad but luvit.
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