I heard you truly enjoy many things
Dancing melodies
and when nature sings
Pictures of animals, like tall giraffes
Make your heart giggle
and your sweet soul laugh
Light blue... "A favorite color of yours."
A smile from you
your mother adores
I pen you this poem, for I'd like to say
May you have
A wondrous 9Th Birthday!
Author notes
May all your dreams come true Emily~
In a list
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday Emily by Asdzaa Nadleehe.
600 points, ended July 27, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
What a sweet and thoughtful birthday poem. Very well done. And congrats on your well deserved silver.
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Thank you again ...smiles..I should have known this piece would have been lead by your pen..smiles..
She loves the write ...she has a few friends over today..so Im sure we will visit this one many many times..they were all standing around the pc..giggling and judging..it was simply adorable..
Thank you for helping to make this day so special..
Peace and love
Melissa and Emily
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I'm so very Happy she enjoyed this piece!
"Happy Birthday Emily Once Again!"
Have A Wonderful Day!
-Timothy
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Sweet and filled with an innocence all its own.
I'm sure this will bring many more smiles through
passing years as it is read over & over again.
Blue
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Perfect!
Of course, you would be able to pen the perfect birthday poem! This is a wonderful and sweet entry into this contest. I think if anyone could do it of course, you could. You always seem to know EXACTLY what to write. How do you do that???
Good luck to you in the contest!
Hugs & Kisses!
Your AP daughter,
Cayla
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Thank you so very much for this entry..she loves it..smiles..
Peace and love
Melissa and Emily
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