Pushing past the battlefields
of angst and regret
Crumbling the stubborn walls
that hold you in inhibition
Break on through to the other side-
The other side,where the grass is greener
Where the spirit breathes freely.
Break on through to the other side
of your own identity-
The side with no chains
There is peace.
Break on through to the other side
of life.
Author notes
For option 1 in insanityscomeback's "options!!" contest This is written about The Door's song "Break on Through." Hope it makes sense!
A contest entry
- Options!!! by A Poet Named Kyoto.
1050 points, ended August 4, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I'm free by JadalaStar.
700 points, ended September 3, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good
I know its prewritten but it fits this contest also...I'm glad you didn't just pick one that you thought would win but one that matched the criteria.....
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another excelent poem my dearest. i love this, have confidence!!! best wishes to you in the contest, especially to a well deserving poem. i want to hear this song now, seems like a very chelsea like thing
Kelcey -
Awesome! This is one of my favorite songs and you interpreted it quite well! Well Done!
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