All black
The depths of my heart
The color in my eyes
The shadows lurking behind
My demons all around
The light is gone
Its all black
Staring into the darkness
All black
Author notes
I chose option 1 ~ Good Charlotte
This poem was inspired by their song 'All Black' off their new album Good Morning Revival.
In my poem 'All black' represents the evils and troubles in my life and in the world that seem to conquer me at times.
A contest entry
- Options!!! by A Poet Named Kyoto.
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Comments
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Haha I like this better than the Good Charlotte song. I mean that too lol. I thought this was really good and you should win something. Gee ... wonder why you chose Good Charlotte ... The question may never be answered! *heavy sarcasm*
Megan -
Bravo!
This is excellent. It describes the color nicely. The part of the demons is my fav. part. You did a great job on it in my opinion.
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Wonderful poem, great interpretation! I love that song as well as I love your poem. So much emotion in so few lines!
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