I ask you this one question,
How long will it take to realize,
I REALLY DO LOVE YOU.
You asked me why I wouldn't look away,
The day that I met you.
You asked me why I didn't walk away,
When you yelled at me.
You asked me why I stayed with you,
Each day you felt down.
You told me to let you go,
The day that you left me.
You said that I'd be better off,
If I just forgot you.
You asked me why I said to you,
I'm not going to forget.
You asked me why I've waited,
So long to be with you.
You asked me how long I'd wait for you,
I'll wait for you forever.
You said that I was crazy,
I'm just in love with you.
You told me you won't love me,
The way that I love you.
So I told you I'd wait for you,
Just like I used to do.
Author notes
Repetive, but it has a point.
A contest entry
- LONG DISTANCE RELATIONSHIPS by Jeremy0826.
1600 points, ended January 31, 2008, 21 entries
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OOOOOh MYYYYY GOOODD!!! I mean just... like.. OMG OMG!!!! I absolutely LOVE this!!! Its amazing, everything about it is just so.. wow.. I am really.. I can't even explain.. Omg I can COMPLETELY completely relate, you dont know HOW much!!! Thank you SOOOO much for entering my contest!! This poem just... wow.. it really really cheered me up, I'm just.. amazed, i mean.. wow.. wonderful! Brilliant brilliant write.. THank you so much, Lots of Luck!!
<3 Lifes Sorro -
This is great! Thank you so much for taking
the time to enter my contest with this piece.
I appreciate it and wish you the best of luck
with it! Keep up the wonderful work here!
Jeremy0826 -
OMG!
I've felt like this once before... this poem touched my heart and ways that ppl can't thx u for that
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your welcome.
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