Lady of the Night
of darkest moon
your face smiles upon me
as I make this rite
Lady of Darkness
hear my plea
under the night sky
as I light your candles
Lady of Winter
you bring Death to the land
though death comes rebirth
you make us stronger
Blessed Be
My dark Mother
Blessed Be
A contest entry
- MY HUMONGOUSLY AWESOME KINDAH FANTASY CONTEST! by HarvesterOfHearts.
700 points, ended September 7, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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excellent chant translated into poetry wonderful all the best
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Nicely written piece. One thing though, on a personal note I suggest you change either the font color or background. A bit hard to read. A plain background will give an additional effect to the readers.
Thanks so much for participating in my contest. I wish you all the best. I encourage you to keep on writing my friend.
>>>VIRGOAN -
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I couldn't read it the purple on the black to good!! Dark mother the lady of the night then blessed be I really liked how they fit together!! Thanks for reading my poem!
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this is an astouding peice of work. i really enjoyed it and you captured what i wanted for this contest quite well...
best of luck!
~lostelvenchild
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i really like the writing, the purpleish background and purple text was hard for me to read though! but that doesnt matter it is great writing
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this is great! Its just like an incantation, the symbolism is perfect for the theme and the tone is perfect for the Dark Mother, you know your stuff
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Beautiful. I can't think of the right words to describe this, but I think reverent is one of them.
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Transcend All
Groovy write! I like though death comes rebirth, you make us stronger! That sounds really cool!
Namaste'
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just wanted to leave some applause
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