i promised you i would stop
i told u i will live for u
but now that ur gone
i have no reason to live
i grab my blade and slide it acrossed my wrist
and watch the blood run down once again
everything goes away
but only for that second
so i do it again, but deeper
it starts to sting
but i love the feeling
everything gets blurry
im getting light headed
now that u are gone
i have nothing else to live for
so here i go once more
but deeper and the other way
so that i slice my vain
and not have to deal with this pain ever again.....
A contest entry
- ♥ Blackend Love ♥ by stop a bullet.
385 points, ended August 5, 2007, 23 entries
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Comments
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Very emotional and very well written. I can completely relate to what you have written.. I have felt the way you have many times. So much pain in this poem.. I loved it. Great job and thanks for entering. good luck.
}{aley -
Wow! I really don't know wat to say... It's VERY emotional and has extreme intensity. Great work!
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