My love is torn
pulled back and forth
like the hands of time
I wish there was only one direction
a unique selection
our hearts would match
a beat, a rhythm
most dream to step to
intense chemistry
a fervor
unconditional truth
he the teacher, I the observer
Author notes
I've not been able to write for the past couple years really..... and if I did, it usually turned out sucking... but this was the closest to decent... So I thought I'd celebrate one step away from the shit poetry I've had lately.
Please tell me what you think
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You know...poetry is an art form no?
So art contains so much rubbish, yet there are always a couple who think the most shitty piece of art is Excellent! So don't be afraid to post crap as I'm sure somewhere, mostl ikely where there is no real education in the schools, someone will think its excellent. So dont be afraid to post crap, make a retard happy!
Anyways... Maybe you just need a new angle. Start writing cute lovely lil poems for 5 year olds about how your cat has a tail and how the sun gives warmth...
(ok this advice is crap to but hey... im not a professional critic so....)
Hope all is good and have a merry xmas!!!
ok its early for that but considering neither of us ever get on here much it has to do.
ciao
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