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Garden (Haiku)



tulips kiss tree roots
and share their pollen gladly
with the other blooms

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  • Katyv
    August 11, 2007
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    beautiful


  • Candy6
    July 27, 2007
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    so exquiste


  • Arkbear gold member
    July 25, 2007
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    ....also...the background is extremly beautiful ~

    Bear ~


  • Arkbear gold member
    July 25, 2007

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    This is Lovely ~

    I love the way you transitioned from one line to the next ~

     

    A beautiful piece you have penned ~

     

    Good luck to you ~

     

    Bear ~


  • thelordreigns gold member
    July 23, 2007

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    This is a wonderful haiku interpretation of the picture. And your background is perfect. Well done poet!

    - joanne


  • holly9
    July 22, 2007
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    Beautiful background. Beautiful haiku!

  • bethan-gaze gold member
    July 22, 2007
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    Love the background you've found for this piece ... and your haiku is exquisite! The whole idea of tulips "kissing tree roots" appeals to me. They are such sensuous flowers ... like little girls that bow their heads when they are shy, etc. A gorgeous write.

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