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Equality (DYR)

Do you remember when daddy told us
that all men had the potential
to be equal,
but equality didn't have the potential
to be fair?

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DYR, 25 words.

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  • Exodus gold member
    July 22, 2007

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    Oh WOW! I really love this, and everything it says. This is certainly what this type of poetry is about. Being able to say something profound in so few words is a hard thing to master. Thank you