Have you ever gotten too close
and burned yourself
because you got lost in the light
and forgot you were holding on
to a lit match?
Author notes
HYE, 26 words.
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Hahaha yes! *shame!!*
Before I forget I'm pretty sure it should be "too close" not "to close"
Beautiful piece, and the layout really works. Thank you ^_^ -
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Man, I know I have. And thanks for the to/too thing, I always manage to mess those up, but no program ever tells me when it's wrong. ^_^
Glad you liked it! -
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It took me ages to figure out which one was which and I still get them wrong all the time
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