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The Day We Became One

I may be seen as lost
But I will always be found
Your love keeps me near
Even when I’m far

We are both unique
But always shared a bond
I felt your pain, I felt your joy
I knew the secrets that were hidden in your dreams

The times we shared
The memories to cherish
They will remain with me
And I know they will with you as well

Never say goodbye
For I have not left
I know you’ll never be alone
On every journey you take

The Wind is my Whisper
The Sun is my Smile
The Spring is my Gift
The Summer is full of my Love

I ask you don’t think of me in pain, but of joy
One journey is done for me, but I start another with you
I may be gone, but I am now complete
The Day We Became One

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  • Jai Guru Deva
    August 5, 2007
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    i love this. very very deep and moving.

    option number?


  • Never Fall in Love
    August 2, 2007
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    You're going to give me diabetes.


  • Pisces Pieces
    July 24, 2007

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    I have read this several times now, and really can't get over it, it's like you know exactly where I am right now and just went there with this.

    I realize that this poem, for some, will be significant of one who has passed, but for me, it is one that just is not here with me in person...either way it is simply beautiful and appeals to exactly how I've been feeling, so although unintentional...thank you for capturing that and I'm so happy you found the contest and I found your poem!

    Best of luck~


  • Sle3p
    July 21, 2007

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    this is absulutely wonderful, welcome to allpoetry. You'r poetry is some of the best i've seen today. I realy liked reading it and hope you write more like this soon. Welcome and keep you'r writting up.

    -maddie