Breath of air a softly spoken word.
he's seen so much
beyond and above me
somehow he knows my name
my thoughts, my dreams
and within those eyes of gray
all I see is time.
Author notes
3. the eyes of a wise man (35 words)
A contest entry
- Semi quickie, for poetic thoughts by Dark Whispers.
450 points, ended July 23, 2007, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow, for only 35 wor that was really really good, although I think you could go without the periods
great write -
nicely spoken of a wise man, and you did a great job of it.
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