Liquid, changeless,
changeling,
charisma clinging
vapors exhaust
the nerves.
thru all the neverminds and so,
the petty sins
we sell, accumulate in the dark.
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Written August 30th, 2003
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I envisioned the Goddess Pele. Lava flowing beneath the crust gathering forces in the dark errupting in liquid flows only to cool and rise again wrapt in volcanic vapors. " Liquid changeless changeling" Mysterious and Powerful
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yes.... maybe they prefer the dark..
and I think you just turned the light on.... -
Very deep, love always should have a power to live in the hearts so long.
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I'm confused...a changeless changeling? hmmm...could be a changeling that will NOT change I suppose, as in attitude. hmmmmmm... Then again, the title is 'Goddess', and if it is Love of which you speak, we all know how fickled she can be. The same, yet different, each time she visits. That too could be a changeless changeling...ARGH! It's too early for my brain to work this hard! Anyway...I did like the feel of this. ~~~Val
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"Liquid, changeless,
changeling,
charisma clinging
vapors exhaust
the nerves"
Woweez!!! Awesome job...
!~YS4e ~!
Scarlett -
A watery, sultry write. Short but sweet...and dark in it's tone.
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