Dear,
It's funny how everything comes with mix blessings. I never thought you and I would fall apart. Like wrinkles that make one's appearance look so old or silver hair that makes one's look as if he has a lot wisdoms, life's beauty is perplexed. Sorry for the grief we shared, I hope we see pass the misunderstandings and harmonize as we move on forward.
Aches and sadness are my current scars. Every time I think of you, tears cascade down my cheeks. I wish I could express my true emotions but certain things in life must left unspoken. I wish you well and may you find grace in everything you do but I will never forget how you bruised my heart. I hope you're happy now, you broke what was the most sacred of our love; your words you did not keep, love me like I love you. I love you like the air in my lungs, it is with profound sadness that I have to exhale you out.
Peace and happiness, may we part in good spirits. Although I know this separation is hard to bear, yet I have to accept the bitterness of your absence. No more golden sunset, no more walking by the lake, no more late night phone calls. Truly, there is sadness in my heart but I must not neglect the malicious act that brings us here. I love you faithfully, I fought with pride every great temptation, I never kissed nor let any other woman come before you. I never thought you would let me down, but you did. Oh well, it is with great sadness that I have to say farewell, you were my everything.
Goodbye my lady, for the present, you are forgiven. Pardon the affectionate unfamiliarity; kind regards, as happy as I am, tears still run down of my cheeks in remembrance of you. Today I pluck with my bear hands a dozen of red roses just for you. You should receive it before the day ends. It is sent via first class mail with a little note sealed with my own sugary kiss. Ah! cheer up -- You will forever remain a sparkling jewel in my poverty. In addition, I thank you a whole lot. Even in your absence, I will still find a million of reasons to be pleased. You will cordially be missed.
Author notes
@) Write me a goodbye poem. What if you had to say goodbye to someone you really care about?
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Awe what a sadness behind this piece. Sounds like so much loss yet you still love this someone so much.
Wow and it is so relatable.
this is a wonderful piece and i simply adored it.
Thank you for sharing it and thanks for entering . Good luck in contest.
-Mandi
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I love this piece! A tale of betrayal and heartbreak, yet firm enough to let her know you are moving on! Great write. Thanks for the entry
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i love this
very nice
and your vocab
amazing
that is awesoem how you can write something like this
and i can see that you ment so much with it
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Beautiful expression and absolutley heartbreaking.
Thank you for entering this very very very touching write in the contest!
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You did a wonderful job on this writing ! I know it was hard . I am proud of you !
Good work it will get easier .
~Lisa~
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delightful
though sadden by events still this offered another point of view of life and the future.
at times we forget the many things in life that makes us what we are and keps us where we are. Very nice sharing.
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this is beautiful. Your words seem to flow freely without any hestation. Thanks for the read and keep on writing
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filled with the twist and turns of love at its best and worst very heart felt the emotions weave into this peace is as heart felt as any i read in awhile best of luck in the contest.
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What a beautiful piece of work. Emotionally you used perfect words, and held onto them perfectly. You did not falter throughout the whole thing.
Great job, and how sad.
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great job on this, i realy like the title, it got my attention.
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This is good.
I really like the letter format.
Good luck with your contest!
TheHeartOfEverything
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really cute...
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Very Emotional
Very well written and so so sad...I hope for you this writing could be some sort of catharsis for you...I wanted to cry when I read this
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this was good i liked it but i think something is missing from the highlighted sentence gd job
but certain things must left unspoken (be) perhaps imay be wrong.
good luck
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This though bittersweet is filled with such love. You can feel the love still within the words of saying good bye. An undertone of disappointment and disgust are evident yet they don't over power the sincerity of your love and you have taken the letter of thanks and gave it that twist. Thank you for breaking my heart....but in doing so..I am better off. May the love you so seek and seem aptly able to give find you and hold you as the rare jewel that you appear to be. Best of luck in the contest and in life's journey.
Dawn
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sigh...
if someone could write me such words even half as beautiful as these even if in goodbyes....i think my heart would be forever content.
this is rich with emotion and depth, lovely and yet filled with a sadness that has been come to terms with.
best of luck in the contest
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Nice...
I liked it. Well spoken words that are obviously enriched from your soul. Good luck in this contest.
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Very well done.. I really enjoyed this very much. Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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Sweet and lovely! I enjoyed reading this very much and loved all of your colourful imagery! Beautifully written and so full of feeling!
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dude dat is soo cute good look on da ct!!
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who knows!
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