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[Pretty please] isn't enough

Mirror Mirror on the wall,
who's the ugliest of them all?

I think I left my dignity
somewhere between the last two boys
[somewhere over the rainbow]

skipping&jumping like a 12 year old
saying [pretty please] & thank you wasn't enough
[wouldn't it be great if it was?]

Can't stop this feeling, pretty
& saying I'm beautiful makes me feel worse
[too bad it's opposite day]

skinny jeans & ear piercings
one liners that taste so sour that you might as
well ..

CONFISCATE♥

my dirty little ear drums
[SCREAMMMMMM! No they don't work anymore.]


eyeliner can't fade the times I cried
& eyeshadow can't hide the scars you left
[so I might as well rhyme myself to death]

ticktockticktock, darling
your [crazy]face isn't going to help me any
[magazines are the only thing I can get off too]



[Mister Doctor can't help me now
straighten my bow & fix my shoes
baby's got the birthday blues
silly boy, it's not over you]

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  • On Frail Wings.
    August 9, 2007
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    wow. this is a great poem. you've got real talent. nice write and good luck!


  • OctoberCrush
    July 27, 2007

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    Mirror Mirror on the wall,
    who's the ugliest of them all?

    I think I left my dignity
    somewhere between the last two boys
    [somewhere over the rainbow]

    AND

    skinny jeans & ear piercings
    one liners that taste so sour that you might as
    well ..

    CONFISCATE♥

    LOOOVE IT**

    Well Done**
    You're a very talented Poet


  • forbidden-colour
    July 21, 2007

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    "I think I left my dignity
    somewhere between the last two boys
    [somewhere over the rainbow]"

    Sweety.
    Those lines were just beautiful.
    I feel like that the majority of the time.

    Finalist doll.x.
    x