Goddess of wealth and prosperity
Wealthy of love and luxurious of sensuality
Awaits you around the corner
With her tender heart open wide
~*~
Sadly you ignore her, not knowing
The vast riches and opulence you miss
She will fill you with love sublime and
Enthrall you in her luxurious sensuality
~*~
Your eyes and heart firmly closed to her
You are blinded to her fascinating beauty
She is a gem among gems and elysian
Her love is pure and soul wonderful
~*~
Open your eyes and behold her charms
Open your heart and feel her love flood
Taste the heavenly nectar of her love
Luxuriate in her sensual abundance
~*~
Her obsession for you is your bliss
She is the goddess of your dreams
No more hesitate nor waver indefinitely
Let her love and ecstasy consume you
~*~
Copyright © 07/20/2007 Poet Raja
A contest entry
- Ended. by Silence of Finality.
600 points, ended August 12, 2007, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautifully penned
I loved this piece. The format is complimentary as is the sentiment. Some of the redundancy (love, wealth, luxury) might be alleviated with different word choice in a few areas, however, overall it was truly exceptional. Thank you very much for your kind write.
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This is quite the straight forward piece of what exactly she feels for him and why he should open his eyes and heart to bare her a chance. For it is as you said within her he shall experience the grandest love ever. Lovely! Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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Lakshmi reincarnate knocking on your heart
A beautiful write Joel, very uplifting and hopeful. 
s and best of wishes always... ~Genie~
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