You were my first
you were also my last
everything that happened
happened so fast
You were someone to talk to
I wasnt thinking
because it felt like i knew you
felt like I had someone to miss me
You'll always be my first
You'll forever be my past
but i dont forget you
because you were my last
Your still my friend
your still around
sometimes I need you
even though your nowhere to be found
Sometimes I think of you
when it all gets rough
when theres no one to talk to
your memory is enough
Now when I see you
things will never be
they way they used to
cause I miss how you missed me.
A contest entry
- What Hurts The Most by Ignis Corpus.
750 points, ended April 20, 2008, 58 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I did enjoy reading this poem. It did make me think and it made sence to me. Though now, I know I shouldn't miss him. He'll be the one missing me. I don't care anymore if he loves me cause I know in my life, I'll find someone who is worth my time. I really liked the poem. I wish you the best of luck in this contest.
Beautifuldisasterxx

