Ride the merry-go around
and you will see
far exotic places
on land and sea.
Hop aboard
and take a ride.
Close your eyes,
travel to the other side.
The ticket,
your imagination;
close your eyes,
reach your destination.
Travel through
time and space.
Live a new life
in a different place.
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Lady Altheia
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A contest entry
- Merry-Go-Round, Invite ONLY by Lady-Pegasus.
1200 points, ended September 9, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Isn't internet what this is all about? Travelling 'round to other places, meeting people you would not have heard of, if it wasn't for internet.
Love it.
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Nice
What a wonderful piece of poetry.
Well penned
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Wonderful
Very nicely done. A soothing and visual poem. Best of luck in the contest.
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I love Merry Go Rounds they are about the only thing I will ride lol
Thanks for taking us all away. Wonderful flow and imagery. Good luck sis
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Like how you invited us to join you on this trip on the merry-go-round - taking us to all kinds of destinations. Easy to read and understand - good flow and rhythm and rhyme,
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