Dear Diary,
Today was the day that I decided to write, all my problem and worries. To tell you everything that has gone wrong in the world today. Today Marks the day that it all went down all the heart break the worries, and the sounds. I tried to drown them out but nothing would come, I turned the radio up and closed the doors. Nothing could help me there voices would never drown out, know matter what I would do. I could hear there screams from downstairs, there shrill cry's and there tears. I had let slip today that I was expecting, but all my efforts to make this important information decided to be taken the wrong way. I told them it was a girl that I was keeping her, but there looks told me that it wasn't happening. They told me to abort in all was than one, told me to get ride of the evidence that would become. I wanted my child to be healthy and strong not have to live in a deserted waste land such as this. My mom smiled at me from above I new she would be happy even tho she was no longer around. I wanted the rest of the family to be the same but all my accusations were cast to blame. Now dear diary I set here in the floor of my old room, my bags are packed and my lover is on his way to get me. He knew about it all and seemed very excited, I wanted my family to be the same way but NO! the wanted to curse, scream, and yell at me for being so careless. So dear diary I can hear his car now, I must go and try to sneak past all the screaming and yelling down stairs, and into a new life.
Good bye my only friend dear diary
~heart broken, misery remains in me~
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something to remind me of what my life consist of
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Good write. There are a few spelling errors, not too many. I can tell the piece held alot of emotion. Families don't communicate anymore. I know from personal experience. Good Job.
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thanks I tried my best on this piece with the spelling errors, but unfortuanly it didn't work, I'll try harder next time but thanks for the support
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This is a very tragic yet profound write. Too often are those that are closest to us wrong about what is in our best interest. There has been a severe breach in communication and personal respect that ultimately leads to this character running away. Apart from spelling mistakes ( there should be their and cry's should be cries), an excellent read!
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thanks for the comment, I tried to make this one as spelling error free as I could but, I guess I got in a hurry, and I usually get there and their mixed up so when I think I'm using the right on I'm usually using the wrong one. But thanks for your support XD
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