Little Angel oh so sweet,
In my heart is where I keep.
As she walks along in her secrete garden filled with flowers,
With her beaming love it showers.
Little Angel heaven sent with full of love,
She makes me soar like a dove.
Her cheek's so Rosy the sky so blue,
Here in heaven she waits for you.
Author notes
Please tell me what you think if I need to add more I'll try.
Amber
A contest entry
- Angels come in all shapes and sizes, Picture inspired by tawk.
700 points, ended July 28, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Come Check It Out Contest by tears.of.silence.
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Please tell me what you think
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I don't believe it needs more. Great poem, nicely penned. Thank you for the entry
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Thanks for reading.
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Lovelly poem. very pretty, well done.
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This is truely a beautiful write.Thank you for shairng this piece with me best wishes and much love
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Thank you so much for reading please feel free to read more.
Amber
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Very sweet and uplifting.
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Thank you please feel free to read more.
Amber
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Oh! I love it...it's really peaceful, simple yet very beautiful. Nice job my dear.
Keep writing and God Bless
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thank you so much.
Amber
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I like the ending. It's cute. Very nice
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thanks for reading please feel free to read more.
Amber
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a sweet and heartfelt poem ... very lighthearted and joyful ... good luck in this contest ...
maa
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Thank you so much for reading, please feel free to read more.
Amber
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this is very sweet has the gentle feel of a butterfly wing; your garden is a wonderful poetic place...PK
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Then you so much for reading feel free to read more.
Amber
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Perfect just perfect
This is a lovely write and no I wouldnt add a thing.
For to me it is perfect
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okay.
Amber
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Such a wonderful write so full of love. I think you meant Angel instead of Angle, but otherwise a very inspiring write. Good luck in the contest
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Thanks for reading an I'll go change that.
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