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Getting Lost

The time slips by slowly
one tick, one tock,
followed only by my heart beat.

Follow me, follow me
lets get
lost in this mess.

Please.

I can't fight the temptation,
I can't stop this ticking.
In my head.

Walking through the woods again,
You're always following me,
Everywhere I go.

I can't escape,
I can't get out of your head,
Trying to push you,
Out of my heart again.

Follow me, follow me
Lets get
Lost in this mess.

You and I both know the truth.

I can't stay alone for long,
Not that I really want to.

Because
I just want you.

The passage of time,
Like the dripping of water
From the dam,
I don't know why:-

I want to get lost.

Follow me, follow me
Lets get
Lost in this mess.
Lost in this mess.

Follow me.
Please.

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  • xDanielx
    July 21, 2007
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    Awesome

    This is a very nice poem, great job I like this part.

    "I can't escape,
    I can't get out of your head,
    Trying to push you,
    Out of my heart again.

    Follow me, follow me
    Lets get
    Lost in this mess."

    That was amazing. Great job and keep writing.

    xDanielx