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Perfectly False (longer)

When I looked to you
I saw the the blackness of your core
Beautifully masked by the sunset's sweet softness

So falsely perfect
So perfectly false

And that made me want you even more
Seeing your flaws
But basking in your visible beauty

So falsely perfect
So perfectly false

I know who you are and what you'll do
Hurt and destruction follows your lead
But the bad boy heart is tainted by the flawless exterior

So perfectly false...

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  • black lagoon x
    July 28, 2007

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    Nice work,it's so well written!keep the great work up,i know you'll do well!



    -R.A.*


  • Teardropfallagain
    July 22, 2007
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    wow, great message and also great write keep it up!!!!


  • Serene Rose
    July 21, 2007
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    Nice.I like the message in it.It flows very well.it was well written.Excellent job.