By the time you get this my life will be no more.
My life was rubbish.
I had been beaten and abused
And even attacked with a pair of scissors.
Whoever finds this should know who I was.
My name was Jade Edmond.
I was 12 years old.
I ran away because I was being threatened and bullied by people at school.
I cried myself to sleep every night,
Afraid to tell my parents the truth.
Please, somehow;
Tell my family I'm sorry and I won’t forget them.
Please make sure my mother hears this:
Dear Mum,
I am sorry I left you this way.
I wish I could tell you the truth.
I think of you everyday.
Although I am gone I want you to remember,
That I'll always love you.
Please try to understand what I've been through;
I can’t let you suffer the pain.
Just please remember me,
Your only loving daughter,
Jade
A contest entry
- I Want Depression Poems (Make Me Want To Cry) by Winter Wolf.
600 points, ended July 27, 2008, 84 entries
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Comments
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omg this is depression
to much emotion is what i felt
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This was a really sad piece you have here. I am sure that there are tons of people out there that can realte too this. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for entering and best of luck too you in the contest.
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Wow... how sad. It's very beautiful, even though the topic is a sadder one.
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awww this is so sad I'm sorry I know how it feels to be abused it sucks it hurts its painful to remember I know how it feels to be bully I hate anyway remember you alway have friends your not alone very strong emotion in this and goodluck
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Oh, man. That's really...I'm sorry. I like this, though, even though that's a very sensitive topic for anyone to write about. I had a cousin commit suicide 2 months ago because of being abused and the like. I'd like to say that this is a very good expression of the feelings that we feel about this.
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