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Spirit of the Night

Girl of the starlight
spirit of the night
dancing in the moonlight
to music of the night.

Singing to the sweet breeze
swinging like the silver trees
singing in the half-light
to music of the night.

Black forms soaked in white
beautiful and bright
holding to her dreams tight
to music of the night.

Laughing at the moonbeams
crying for her dark dreams
looking for what's right
to music of the night.

Girl of the starlight
spirit of the night
dancing in the moonlight
to music of the night.

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  • Tylers Baby
    October 27, 2007

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    GREAT

    well my name is lbush because my name is laci bush and thanx alot 4 the sugestions ill try 2 get 2 that and i really like ur poem


  • Cannonsfire gold member
    July 25, 2007
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    Oh I can hear the haunting melody in this, wonderful choice. Love, C