The wind would whistle through the dark, dank house
and we'd freeze without a heater.
But we'd soon come round when my mother found
a shilling for the meter.
A contest entry
- Under Four Lines and Funny - A couple of Options. Prewrites by Anastasiya.
477 points, ended July 23, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Liked this short rhyming poem - just four lines, but they are funny. Cute write. Easy to read and uunderstand.
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very good...lol..best of luck!
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It's pretty good. thanks for entering my contest and good luck.
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blessings always~ Trisha
