I can feel my heart break up inside.
My heart that used to be
filled with love and joy.
But now its just an empty space,
much like an old, empty vase.
My life is worth no more.
My tears are turning inky black,
Tears that used to be blue.
I cannot bare to live again
And neither would i dare.
For what you said has scarred my life.
You've ruined my life again.
My ruby red blood is running out
For I have bled too much.
Bled so much for my own sake,
For my own satisfaction.
I do not want to live again.
For ill have to face my fears.
If you continue doing this,
I'll die again and again.
A death which you'll be responsible for,
As much as the hours of pain.
Please stop hurting me.
I'm already dead.
You have succeeded in your plan.
My body is broken,
My mind is bent
And i have a soul no more.
You've killed me slowly,
painfuly,
dishonurbly.
Just let me rest in peace.
In a list
A contest entry
- I Want Depression Poems (Make Me Want To Cry) by sophia moonfairy.
600 points, ended July 27, 2008, 84 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I wrote this at 5 in the morning so it might not make much sense. Please tell me what you think.
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I like this poem this is deep yet so sad amazing how you express yourself
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its really sad
its well deep and you really feel for the person who is that sad
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thanks!
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I really like this.. its deep.. keep it up..
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