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~Urban legend from a Pseudonymn~

Right through the glass as you brush your hair   
Murmur repetitions, whisper chants...bloody mary
Moments trapped in a moment's resilience and emptiness
Time pauses, everything is greyed out like eternity's oblivion
Reflection of you fluorished as Mary's stand beside you with her blood stained robe
     

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Prompt: Bloody Mary

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  • layla.
    July 23, 2007
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    I love your imagery.
    Good luck!


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 22, 2007
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    Image that this shows me is two fold.