I finally remember it once more when we spoke for a while First getting to know each other then began the tie
But I kept taking 1 step forward and 1000 steps back the most precious thing in my life is there something I lack?
I know there will be a path to reach to her heart to make herself blush and begin a new start
And each day I sleep the fantasies become more colorful and alive the rich hues are so blue I believe they're coming true
Nevertheless I will be patient until the one day becomes ever so true
Now the sun comes up and this piece is done the light gets brighter every minute
and my noctournal self needs to rest
~May the blossoms return again~ |
Please tell me what you think
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Okayyy so I just had to read more of your poems, because the "Tyme" one was greattt=]
I really liked this one! I could picture some of this is my mind as I read, and I'm tellin ya, you're a greattt writer!
"the fantasies become more colorful and alive
the rich hues are so blue
I believe they're coming true"
Take those lines. Ahhmazing!! Keep it up! I might have to read some more of your poems!
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Thankeez.
Thanks for your comment! I guess i'll go and read some of your too.
Thanks again! ^_^
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If a person could have a firm and sincere heart of love like this one, then he should never be afraid of finding no love.
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You don't lack anything. Keep stepping forword.
I love this piece.It almost made me want to cry.
Whoever she is...she's lucky.
And I'm sure you make her blush all the time.
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