Walking proudly
through the jungle
thinking he is the king
of everything in sight
Suddenly a man pops up
right out of nowhere
and shouted...HALT!!!
The dumb lion
didn't know what
he could possibly do
So as humbly
as possible
he went up to the gun
and said...
meow!!!
Author notes
12 years old
lion king...obviously
A contest entry
- Movie Titles - Ages 12 and Younger ONLY by Kari.
300 points, ended July 23, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Adorable
This is a cute little story/poem. What a surprise at the end! I think I'd say meow too! Great take on the original story. Best wishes in the contest.
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lol this was really cute and put a smile on my face. You did a good job with the title and the best of luck in the contest
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haha is the gun the lion's king? if it is then its kinda funny heee hee good luck
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hehe yah the gun is the lion's new master
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