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Red sky in the morning

Hushed whispers muttered beneath feathered grace
cradling the start of society's mood.
Confusion born, wrapped in the sound of December
bringing more than a biblical scent;
It all started without a kiss...

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prompt ~ Bloody Mary

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  • Namita
    July 23, 2007

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    Amazing work. Congrats on the gold. Very well deserved.

    Luv,
    Candy


  • layla.
    July 23, 2007
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    this is beyond beautiful and sad.
    Good luck!


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 22, 2007
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    oh my dear poet you have penned yet again a winner.