I started,
now I cant stop
Part of me wants to,
But the other won’t let me
Addiction rules me
I’ve let it get in my way
I can’t let this continue
It will stop right now
I don’t need this
In fact I’m done
On second thought
Just this one...
Author notes
A poem about addiction in general, and how it affects me.
A contest entry
- ♥[Addiction]♥ What sucks you in? by Salt Therapy.
450 points, ended July 30, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any input would be appreciated
Comments
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good stuff. Any addict should be able to relate. I like compact poems.
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This poem is kind of plain... I'm not really feeling it. It's confusing, and not really clear. Thanks for entering my contest!
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broad?
the thing you're addicted to could be any number of things. anything at alllll. do you want me to guess? it'll be scary.
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