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Portrait Play~

Missing image

A portrait w             ~

                e         d

                   a   e

                     v

                       
 through

    p u z z l e d  maze

 

So  m a n y  deceived


    when g  a   c 

               l  n   e

                         s  

                             gaze

Winding r o w s

         writer between pews

 in silent shadows

 

        paper

         people

          snooze 

 

reading reviews~

Author notes

Picture Prompt~

A contest entry

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Comments


  • Ryno
    July 22, 2007

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    This is so creative and was such a different take on the prompt... i thought it was very cool what you were incoorperating, but I also am not sure if I fully understand the use of the fancy word displays, I really want to, I'm just looking for an answer Thanks for your entry and sorry for not being able to figure out the format.


  • Desire gold member
    July 21, 2007

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    Oy!

    Love the words You have weaved my Friend
    and also the message in between the lines;
    the words: silent shadows
    Magnificent!!

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • rite
    July 21, 2007

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    Through focussing we see one thing clearly in particular, excluding what is surrounding it, intertwined with the subject of our focus. It is what we were taught to do from the instant of our birth. It does not give us a good impression of the maze we find ourselves trapped in, nor does our concentrated perception tell us anything useful about the subject we study or work on. We have thus become paper people, living the laws decreed by those who do not want us to detect what is there beyond the area of our sight. Thank you for creating and sharing this most remarkable and playfully arranged poem, my friend. I wish you good luck in the contest. Take care,

    Chris