the beast within
cautious with every move
Beautiful maiden
like a flower
oh how her eyes doth sing
Dress flowing in the wind
able to trick
even the smartest man
In her heart
the truth spills out
she's just a beast within...
Hiding carefully
the beast within
cautious with every move
Beautiful maiden
like a flower
oh how her eyes doth sing
Dress flowing in the wind
able to trick
even the smartest man
In her heart
the truth spills out
she's just a beast within...
the beast within
cautious with every move
Beautiful maiden
like a flower
oh how her eyes doth sing
Dress flowing in the wind
able to trick
even the smartest man
In her heart
the truth spills out
she's just a beast within...
Author notes
age 12
movie title: Beauty and the Beast
A contest entry
- Movie Titles - Ages 12 and Younger ONLY by Kari.
300 points, ended July 23, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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yes i totally agree with...Karamel Kandy
totally the best lines!!!
it has a nice little bouncy rhythm to it
very nicely written
good luck with the contest
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Awesome job! I think that you did really good, and I enjoyed reading it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
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nice poem...but this one part confuses me...
Dress flowing in the wind
able to trick
even the smartest man
it sounds like the dress is able to trick people but did you mean that? cuz i get an impression that it's supposed to be the girl that tricks but yah dress tricking ppl does make sense
well anyways good luck with the contest
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haha i guess it could be either way...its up to you hehehe
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A really unique poem. I love the last lines. Killer! Great job. Keep penning and thanxx for sharing this piece with AP.
Luv,
Candy
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