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The One

Wandering the night,
Wishing, searching, waiting,
For the one,
Who's love,
Will save you from it all,
Who will hold you when you're down,
And bring you back when you've lost yourself.

Reminding you of all you are,
And all you have to become,
Picking you up when you've fallen down,
Putting you back on solid ground,
The one,
Who will go through hell and back,
Just to hold your hand for awhile,
Giving the world just to see you smile,
And when you see him you know,
Your arms were made for each other,
And when he's in your arms,
You never want to let him go.♥

Author notes

yea. thats all I got, writers block sucks, doesnt help that I was in a major car accident and should be dead right now..but yea...hope you liked.

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  • Crazy-Dan
    January 22, 2008

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    i wanna see this poem get longer, just when it gets good, it ends.
    It was great, but i loved this

    is suppose its about me?


  • She burns
    July 23, 2007

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    Oh so beautiful, it jsut very loving, with all the hearts of heart, oh how I long and ache for this love so much...


  • NerdforChrist777
    July 21, 2007

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    oh my gosh are you still hurt from it?, well, if you're still alive, then God must have wanted you to be alive today.

    P.S. the poem was pretty good

    • fallenangel671
      July 21, 2007
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      yea, I'm kinda bruised up, but yea nothing major, they didnt even call an ambulance for me, even tho my dad said they should of but yea. I believe I haven't forfiled my calling in God yet.

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